Thursday, November 7, 2019
22A - Elevator Pitch No. 3
I noticed that people complimented the formality back from the start, so I kept it. Basically the feedback complimented the good things that I said plus the implicit frase of "practice makes perfect".
What I changed from my other videos is to try look more confident by speaking more laud and clear. Also added more emotion to what I was saying with the effort to catch better the attention of the public.
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Hi Juan,
ReplyDeleteYou ad your background look as professional as always but i would suggest looking at the camera. I know I have trouble doing this as well but I think it will better convey your message. I understand what you're trying to do with the long, dramatic pauses but I think perhaps they may be a bit too long. I do think you seem more confident and you're definitely speaking more loudly. Also be sure to double check your spelling but overall this is your best pitch yet, great job!